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F wrote on March 28, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Peter,
Can you give me some ideas for writing a mystery or a realistic fiction? Btw, i LOVE the 39 clues series. I've read them all and I am very excited to read Vespers rising.
Admin Reply:
Many thanks. I think you'll really like VESPERS RISING -- only a few more days! And you're in luck with your question, too. Fortunately, a couple of recent readers have just asked for the same guidance, so I invite you to read the most recent three messages, and I hope that will help get you started!
James wrote on March 24, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Thank you so much for your time and I will use your advice!
Admin Reply:
You're welcome. Good luck, James!
A wrote on March 24, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Hola Peter
How many languages do you speak. I am one of the students at westorchard and I loved your thoughts on how we said our story about the ragdoll that is 600 years old. What book are coming out besides Vespers Rising. Do you love reading? I want to write something but I can't think of anything. Do you have any suggestions on what I should write???????/
A
Admin Reply:
Hola -- I had such a great time visiting Westorchard. Your school has been wonderful to have me visit six years in a row! I think you guys did a fantastic job with the story of the 600-year-old rag doll. That was fun. As for languages, well, I speak a little Greek, because that's my family background. I also speak some German, because I studied that language in school. That's about it. I am working on many new books these days. I have all kinds of news about that on this web page. Yes, I LOVE reading. It's one of my favorite things to do. If you want to write something, maybe you can start with the rag-doll story and see if you can come up with a great ending. Or, spend a day really examining everything that happens around you. The minute you see something unusual, write it down: a funny thing someone says, a strange incident. Every story involves some sort of mystery, so if you think of even a small one, that could start you on the road to a great story. So think about that incident and spin it into a story by ask some of the questions we asked in the workshop: What happens after the incident? Where does this happen? Who are the characters involved? What's the problem? Remember, you can use your imagination to take a small, real incident into different settings. You'll be turning something real into something fictional! Another way is to use pure imagination, like we did in the workshop. Think of a crazy character, like the 600-year-old rag doll. Then really think about details to make that crazy character real -- remember when someone suggested, "He's looking for a job!" That was great. We were able to imagine what would happen when that character decided to look for a job. Soon we had a fun and complex plot, with interesting and unusual characters -- just by digging in and developing an idea that came from two suggestions. Good luck, and I hope this helps!
James wrote on March 24, 2011 at 11:11 AM
For the book. I'm sorry that I didn't specify that!
Admin Reply:
No problem. Think of places where you spend your days -- your school, your home, etc. Or places you like to go on vacation, etc. Any place that you know very well. Settings are important in mysteries. Now imagine something missing -- a person, perhaps. Or a valuable thing. Now figure out who would want that missing thing, and why it would be so important for that person to take it. Then think of a hero -- someone who really wants back that thing or person that has been stolen. Was it really stolen, or was it a misunderstanding. (If it was just a misunderstanding, you can have a funny ending.) Whether it's funny or dramatic, figure out realistic ways that the whole theft could be misconstrued, so you can fool the reader. There's a start.
L wrote on March 24, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Hi Peter
Do u have time to read if you spend most of your time typing? I love to read but I don't know what book. Vespers rising is coming out April 5th and i can't wait to read it. Do you have any suggestions on a book I should read??????????
L
Admin Reply:
Whew, I'm so busy these days I don't read as much as I used to -- but I make sure to read as much as I can every day! I'd recommend spending some time at a nearby library or bookstore looking at the kinds of books (or the authors) you like best. Get a pile of books and read the first couple of pages of each. At least one of those books will draw you in. Read that one. And don't forget, only two weeks till April 5!
L wrote on March 24, 2011 at 3:11 AM
Peter Lerangis,
I can't wait until Vesper's Rising comes out. I really want to read it. Is this the last book of the series??????
L
Admin Reply:
The good news is that an entirely new series of SIX books will follow after VESPER'S RISING! You can read more info on my site here.
Lauren wrote on March 23, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Do you remember when you answered my question about how the Cahills are connected. Well, you didn't answer it much. At least tell me how the historic Cahills connected to the characters? Not about the first Cahills, but the last historic Cahill of each family like the Holts, the Kabras, the Ohs, the Spaskys, the Starlings, the Cahills (Trents) and the Wizards.
Admin Reply:
Yes, I can understand how frustrating this must be. As I mentioned before, I have never seen a family tree that connects the Cahills person-to-person across the generations. I don't know if one even exists. So, alas, I'm not holding anything back -- I simply don't know. So sorry....
James wrote on March 23, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Hi. I am a grade six student in Montreal, and i have to write a mystery novel for school. At the same time i chose to do a book report on your novel, Spy X: Hide and Seek. I really enjoyed reading it. Then i thought, Hey! Why don't i ask an actual author! Do you have any ideas on what i could write?
Admin Reply:
For the report? Or for the mystery novel? Either way, best of luck to you, James! I'm happy to answer specific questions, but I'm scratching my head a bit over this one...
Ruby wrote on March 23, 2011 at 1:16 PM
Hi Peter,

I write fanfiction stories on fanfiction.net for the 39 clues. Just wondering if you ever do read "fanfics" and what do you think of them? Do you think they make the series look bad or do you think they're "cool continuations of the stories"

Thank you
Admin Reply:
No, sorry to say I haven't read them. These days I barely have time to read much at all! But I like the idea of them very much.
L wrote on March 23, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Peter Lerangis,
Sometimes I can't think about what I should write. I've always wanted to become an author someday. I love the 39 clues too.
L
Admin Reply:
Thank you. Sometimes I can't think about what I should write either. I sure know what feels like. Good luck. Stick with it!
A wrote on March 21, 2011 at 4:12 PM
That did help!
And now, more questions ๐Ÿ™‚

So, I've written my character into a very interesting place, but I need him to become embarassed....How would I create the perfect situation for him to be embarassed if I want him to seem as real as possible?

I've often heard my club leader say, "write everyday, or at least as often as possible." Do you do that? If so, do you use prompts, or do you come up with it completely on your own?

If you get an idea, but have no idea how to start it, do you begin in the middle and figure out the beginning later? What do you do?

How do you develop realistic, 3D characters without giving away too much information?

I've heard that it's best to describe your main character/s within the first chapter (otherwise editors may try to change how he/she looks). Is that recommended? If so, what's the best way for YOU to figure out EXACTLY how they look?

Do you use character sheets, to help you remember facts about your character?

How do you decide where a chapter should end, and a new one begins?

If there is historical references, or your story is abstractly based on a historical event, is it recommended to research that topic? Or just go with what you think you know?

How do you know if your story is moving too quickly?

Do you recommend editing your own pieces until you can find now more flaws in the text?

What do you do if you're writing a story, you've already gotten a title that sticks with YOU, but you don't think it fits/is appropriate for the story?

Are scary stories better written as short stories, or narratives?

How would you create a novel that is very plot-twisty, very confusing, but clicks at the end, when you pull everything together?

When you're writing a short story, do you include dialogue, or is it better to leave that out?

How DO you write a short story?

Sorry for all the questions xD
Thanks for your time!

A
Admin Reply:
Hi, there! Whew, I'm breathless just reading these! Well, some of these require too much time and space for this guestbook, and some would take part of a semester to answer, but I'll do the best I can. Without knowing details, I can't recommend how to solve the "embarrassment" problem, but try to follow the character through the day realistically and come up with a situation that grows out of that -- there are a thousand ways people can face embarrassment, from buying something in a store and realizing you don't have enough money, to being at a party and not knowing you have a piece of food stuck to your cheek, to asking an innocent question that makes someone else cry, etc., etc. I do write every day, and I don't use prompts. (My deadline is my prompt.) Yes, you should try to describe your character right away -- not for fear of your editor, but to be considerate to your readers. They need to know. It's completely up to you how your character looks. The character is fictional, so it's all from your imagination. Be as specific as you can, but try not to list characteristics. It's best if you weave them into the storytelling. I don't generally use character sheets. I'm constantly rereading my own work, so the characters stay specific in my own mind -- but character sheets are a good idea! Chapter endings are a matter of feel, of rhythm. Generally they end on a note of tension (or partial resolution). If I'm writing material with historical context, yes, research is absolutely necessary. I know my story is moving too quickly if someone reads it and says so. Or if I read it myself and it feels rushed. I endlessly edit my own pieces, of course -- that's the only way to make them better. I don't worry much about titles. Sometimes I don't even think of one until I'm finished. Sometimes I let other people think of them for me. I'm not sure what you mean by the distinction between "short story" and "narrative." A short story is a narrative. A story's length has simply to do with the complexity of the idea. Novels have many colorations and subplots, short stories not so many. The answer to the question about writing a twisty novel, alas, could fill an entire book. My most concise answer is that you need to sit down and do an outline -- think of your main idea for the story, the problem and solution, the characters, setting, etc. Dig into those characters; really know them through and through. Launch them into the plot, see how they react to the circumstances and to each other. Give them secrets. The story will grow with all kinds of twists if you know the characters and you really think hard about how they would interact in real life. Yes, I use dialogue in short stories. It's hard to write one without dialogue. As for your last question -- again, the subject of a book! But quite simply, writing a short story is the same process as writing a novel, only you keep the story line simple, and every part of it is gearing toward the finish. Think of a novel as a sweeping landscape painting, and the short story as a detailed closeup of a door.
David Neilsen wrote on March 10, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Dear Mr. Lerangis,

My name is David Neilsen, and I am the Co-President of the EPTA (Elementary Parent/Teachers Association) of the Tarrytowns. We have partnered with other parents, businesses and individuals from the Tarrytown/Sleepy Hollow community to form the Washington Irving Fitness Playground Building Committee.

Washington Irving Elementary School (WI) was originally built to be a high school serving grades 9-12. As such, no playground was ever built on the premises. Over the years, due to changes in the district and consolidation with the former Sleepy Hollow school district, it has been used to house younger and younger students. This year, WI houses its youngest children yet, Grades 3-5. Still, even as the school serves over 600 8-10 year-old children, there is no playground on the premises.

Our committee is dedicated to changing that, and we have been working with the Physical Education instructors at WI to design a Fitness Playground that is age-appropriate for the students at WI and will serve as an additional tool and the core of a new fitness curriculum for future physical education classes. These teachers report that the students at WI routinely under-perform on end-of-the-year physical exams, particularly in the areas of upper body strength and balance. A Fitness Playground would be an excellent tool that could be used to help our children develop the physical skills necessary to live a healthier life. In addition, the Fitness Playground will be open to the community โ€“ a largely residential community that does not have a nearby park or playground- during non-school hours. This focus on fitness is a current theme in this country from the White House, with its Letโ€™s Move initiative to the NFL and its Play60 campaign.

We plan to complete at least the initial phase of construction by September of this year. To date, we have raised over $20,000 towards that goal, but we know that we have a long way to go. To that end, we are holding a silent auction fundraiser at the end of this month, and I was wondering if you would be inclined to donate a signed copy of one of your books, specifically, your novelization of the film Sleepy Hollow. I feel this book would be of great interest to those in our community, and might fetch a solid price for our silent auction.

Please let me know if you can help our project.

If you wish to see and read more about the project, please visit our project website at http://projects.kaboom.org/wi.

Thank you for your time.

Respectfully,

David Neilsen
WI Fitness Playground Building Committee
Email: bbstucco@earthlink.net
Admin Reply:
I would be happy to send a signed Sleepy Hollow book. Please send along a mailing address to peter@peterlerangis.com. (The link http://projects.kaboom.org/wi is not working. I'd love to see the project if you include a revised link in your message, but that's not necessary -- an address is fine.)
Lauren wrote on March 4, 2011 at 11:39 AM
I have asked you many questions before, but this one is really important. There's this book series I really like, but it's not selling very well and I don't want the series to be sacked before book 9 and 10. What should they do?

p.s. it's called Ripley's Bureau of Investigation
Admin Reply:
The only thing that will sway a publisher is sales -- or the promise of a surge in future sales. So spread the word, get your friends to buy the books, let your own passion for the series guide others. Write to the publisher letting them know how you feel, and urge others to do the same. They do pay attention!
A wrote on March 3, 2011 at 4:46 PM
I was wondering...
You've written so many books, and I'm sure many character names are different...where do you come up with all the names?
When you write, do you first have an outline of what will happen, or do you let the story take its own path?
What do you do when you are writing a story and find that it seems to be getting boring or monotonous?
What do you do if you write something into your story, but don't like it?
How do you continue parts that work with what you want, but seem to leave no options available to continue?
Do you randomly come up with ideas for your stories, or do you use prompts?

I'm an aspiring writer, and I'd love the advice!
I love your books sssoooooo much!
Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

A
Admin Reply:
Wow. A lot of very good, thoughtful questions. I'll see if I can help.

Character names: I like thinking of these. I often choose names based on how they sound. A certain personality will suggest a "Bernard," for example, and a very different one a "Dan" or a "Chip." A "Sarah" will be a different person (in my mind) than a "Fiona." I test out the names in my head. Sometimes I'll use a name of someone I know who shares certain characteristics, or a famous person. Or if it's a sci-fi novel, I'll make something up that sounds cool. Sometimes I'll write parts of a book without real names at all -- just boy1, girl1, boy2, girl2 -- and then add a real name later. In a recent YA book, one character's name was too close to the name of a real author (inadvertently), so I changed that character's name -- and the new name was too close to another character's name, but I liked it so much I changed the second character's name, too. Don't forget, you can always change whatever you choose.

Outline: With a plot-heavy novel (i.e., action/adventure, etc.) I will do a very detailed outline and stick to it. Things may change but the basic structure almost always takes me through. With a more character-based novel, or a historical novel, I will create a looser outline, just to give myself a direction. But almost always I end up going different ways, as the characters become stronger.

Monotony/bad prose: These happen all the time, of course! Generally I muscle through as best I can and then periodically go back over what I've written. Sometimes I want to faint. I doubt my own ability to construct a coherent sentence in English. But the biggest part of the writer's craft is knowing how to rewrite. If something is boring, keep at it until it's not. That's it. Use your toolkit -- word choice, pacing, dialog, plot tweaks -- to make the scene exciting. If it's a serious plot problem, that's tougher. Sometimes you have the characters doing things that simply don't move the story forward. In that case, you've either got to cut or think of something more interesting. I'm lucky in in that I have editors to bounce off -- and readers. If you have people you trust to comment on your work honestly, they can help.

I don't use prompts in a formal sense. But I do keep my eyes and ears open for new ideas by observing events and listening to conversations around me, by reading about current events, etc.

Hope this helps!
Bernadette Vang wrote on March 2, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Dear Mr. Lerangis,
My son Anthony Vang is in sixth grade and for his writing class they are writing letters to various authors. He has selected you and have written a letter for you; however, we do not know where to mail it. Would it be possible to get your mailing address?

Anthony is a sixth grader at Sioux Trail Elementary in Burnsville, MN. He is a huge fan and enjoys reading your books. We look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you!
Bernadette Vang
email: pajkublis@live.com or bernadettevang@hotmail.com
phone: 651-319-2915
Admin Reply:
Hello, Ms. Vang! Thank you for writing. Please tell Anthony to feel free to write me c/o Scholastic, 557 Broadway, New York, NY 10012 -- but I hope you don't mind if I make a suggestion. Perhaps he can copy the text of the letter into this guestbook. That way he can be sure of getting a timely answer, which he can print out. The reason is that I am unfortunately swamped with mail and months behind in answering. Because the guestbook is so much easier, I do answer everything pretty promptly -- so at least he will have something tangible for his class assignment! (Of course, the letter is more than welcome, but I'm just afraid I may not get back in time.) Hope that's okay and best regards to Sioux Trails Elementary!
johnny wrote on February 28, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Peter,
I have read 4 books in the 39 clues series and noticed all
of the authors names are different. I was wondering if you
were using a pen name and all the authors are really you. I love all the books so far and look forward to reading the next book. I am currently doing a library project and chose to use your book because every time I read a book from the 39 clues I think they can't get better and they do!
I am doing a presentation in library next week and was hoping to let everyone know if you were indeed the author of all the books or not. I hope to hear back from you soon!
thank you, Johnny
Admin Reply:
Hi, Johnny!

Thanks for your note. I'm so glad you've been enjoying the 39 Clues books. I wanted to make sure to get back to you before your presentation, because believe it or not, there really are different authors, and we all use our real names. So I wrote Books 3 and 7 only. We all have similar styles, though, so I can certainly understand why you would be wondering! Some interesting facts for your project: Rick Riordan was the author of the first book, but he was way too busy to be able to write them all. In fact, with a book coming out every three months or so, it would be impossible for any one writer to write them all. That's how the idea for multiple authors came about. The editors at Scholastic invited Gordon Korman, Jude Watson, and me because we had all written best-selling action/adventure/mysteries. The rest of the authors came along afterward, for the same reasons. We're all good friends and enjoyed working on the great Cahill mystery!

Best of luck with your project!
Kenzie wrote on February 17, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Dear Mr. Lerangis

Hi my name is Kenzie and I love to read all of "the Thirty-Nine Clues" books. My favorite part in book number seven is when Amy and Dan find the diamond bracelet and then people chasing them fall in to a big hole. My favorite character is Nellie because if she where a boy she would be almost just like my brother. I have one question why do so many different people write "The Thirty-Nine Clues" books? Please write back at amy.nicol@hotmail.com. Thanks for writing a great book!
Admin Reply:
Hi, Kenzie! So glad you enjoyed THE VIPER'S NEST! The diamond bracelet scene was one of my favorite parts to write. I hadn't planned to handle the scene that way in my outline of the plot, but the idea came to me as I was writing. That's one of the coolest things about writing a book, the unexpected ideas that hit you at the last moment! The reason there were so many writers for the series is that the books came out so quickly -- one every three or four months. Because of all the research involved, and the complicated plots, it would have been impossible for one person to have written all of them. So Scholastic decided to try something new. The editors contacted some their personal favorite writers (all people they'd worked with before) and proposed the idea of a multi-author series. That way, while one person was writing a book, the other authors would get a head start researching and writing the subsequent books. No book series had ever been done this way before, and we all felt it would be a fun idea!
Lauren wrote on February 15, 2011 at 10:57 PM
I was wondering, how are the famous historic people in 39 clues connected in the family? I don't just mean Luke, Katherine, Thomas, Jane and Madeleline as their ancestors. I mean connected in a family tree, and how are the historic Cahills connected to the characters? Like is Mary Shelley Jonah Wizard's great great grandaunt or is Albert Eistein the Starling's great great grandfather. You know, something like that.
Admin Reply:
Great question! If someone's drawn up a tree, I have not seen it. One of the great mysteries ...
Ciro wrote on February 4, 2011 at 2:01 AM
Hi Peter! My name is Ciro [Cyrus], I live in Sao Paulo, Brazil. I have fifteen years of age. So I'm writing this post because here in Brazil the series The 39 Clues is doing very well, no wonder, with a list of bestselling writers like this! I just read his book, The Thief of Spades, and I think I can say, I really enjoyed it! I was talking to my friend Sarah the other day at school, she asked me what was my favorite writer and I said: "Maybe two? Rick Riordan and Peter Lerangis for sure!" The website for The 39 Clues of Brazil already launched the guise of his seventh book, "Viper's Nest"and I can not wait to read. Anyway, he meant that in Brazilian readers are eager to see the end of The 39 Clues and I particularly want to say [not mentioned it already?] you is a great writer! I also write books, do not like you actually do not even come close, but every day I'm improving and I hope one day my book launch. Thank you for the opportunity to speak to you, and good luck in the new series of The 39 Clues.
From: Ciro White.

P.S: is already confirmed, I am a Janus! ๐Ÿ™‚
Admin Reply:
Hello, Ciro! Thank you so much for this lovely message, written with the great flair of a Janus! I will look forward to hearing of your book launch someday and will be very proud to know you. Regards to the awesome 39 Clues fans of Brazil!
Helen Park wrote on January 26, 2011 at 9:22 PM
Hi Peter,

It was wonderful meeting you today at my daughter, Lauren's, school, despite the weather! Thank you again for coming as the children learned a lot and truly enjoyed your visit! We're all looking forward to your new books. Have you considered writing books for adults? Hope you got home safely.

Take care,
Helen Park
Admin Reply:
Thanks, Helen, for the lovely note! I enjoyed my visit tremendously and was so impressed with how quickly and smoothly everyone was able to juggle the scheduling after the snowstorm began -- managing to allow all three presentations PLUS lunch with the students. Very glad no one was shortchanged! Someday I'd like to write for adults, definitely -- but I'm so busy with projects now, I have no idea when that will happen! I did get home quickly and safely; very nice of you to ask. In fact, I immediately pulled into a parking space directly in front of my building, which is a pretty amazing event in our neighborhood. By nightfall it was buried in snow! Regards to Lauren and everyone at Schuyler-Colfax, and thanks to you all for such a warm response! I hope I'll be invited back someday.